We received critical feedback regarding our main brief today. As a group we did anticipate some flaws or inconstancy with our piece particularly in the house. However we wasn't expecting miss to say that we should remove our entire first half to our main brief which took part in the house.
To fix this issue raised without completely changing our main brief Lily suggested we use clips of Rachel before the incident as another way of showing a change of situation and character.
In the Easter Holidays both Lily and Lucy will be working together to provide videos of Lucy as a child as well as incorporating them into the completed Main brief.
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